Writing romantic scenes doesn't always come easily to me.
It's one of those things I really
have to be in the mood for. Maybe it's because while I like a little romance in the novels I read, it bugs me if it overwhelms the central plot. But that was
another blog post. Writing a good romantic scene is also tricky because it's territory covered so many times over in YA, that you run the risk of filling it full of
cliches.
Whatever the reason, when I'm not in the mood, writing romantic scenes feels like pulling teeth my characters wind up pissed off at each other. Not exactly the development I wanted in their relationship!
Like I
mentioned last week, there are three key things I do to get in the mood for certain scenes: mood music, body language, and re-typing (or re-reading) inspiring scenes. What music and which authors I turn to for inspiration depends on the exact type of romantic moment I'm looking to embody in my scene.
For example, maybe I'll listen to
Home by Edward Sharpe & the Magnetic Zeros if the scene I'm about to write is going to have a cute, boy-next-door feel. Or Mazzy Star's
Fade Into You if the scene is supposed to be more reflective or wistful. Or
Breathe Me by Sia if the scene is a little sad (or William Fitzsimmon's
So This is Goodbye if the scene is REALLY sad). I've compiled some more inspiration sources below.
******SPOILER ALERT: Quotes ahead! Read no further (or skim past the red text) if you don't want to see excerpts of scenes from The Sky is Everywhere, Anna and the French Kiss, Unearthly, Arclight and Transparent******
First Glances:
The first time the MC lays eyes on her/his love interest is always a key moment in a YA novel. Often (but not always!) you know immediately who
this new character is.
It's tricky to write the "first glance" scene without filling it with the typical cliches. Catching someone's eye across the room, looking then looking away, the immediate 'electricity' - they're all things we've seen before, but hopefully with a unique setup, and a bit of work our scenes will be nice and fresh! Here are some sources of inspiration:
Mood Music:
Lights - Ellie Goulding
Little Bit - Lykke Li
Inspiring Authors:
Jandy Nelson
Favorite "First Glance" Moments:
“His face is more open than an open book, like a wall of graffiti really. I realize I'm writing wow on my thigh with my finger, decide I better open my mouth and snap us out of this impromptu staring contest."
-- The Sky is Everywhere by Jandy Nelson
Just Plain Cute:
I'm a total sucker for the cute, 'maybe we're just friends but maybe not' type romance. It might start slow, maybe even with other significant others in the picture, but soon things get a little cuter, a little more flirty and soon you know that the playful banter between the MC and her/his "friend" is going to turn into something more. Here's some inspiration for those sorts of moments.
Mood Music:
Give me a Reason - Meiko
Home - Edward Sharpe & the Magnetic Zeros
I'm Yours - Jason Mraz
All I Want is You - (cover by The Vespers)
Inspiring Authors:
Stephanie Perkins, Jandy Nelson
Favorite "Cute" Moments:
“That was it? The whole story?"
“Yes. God, you’re right. That was pants.”
I sidestep another aggressive couscous vendor.
“Pants?”
“Rubbish. Crap. Shite.”
Pants. Oh heavens that’s cute.
-- Anna and the French Kiss by Stephanie Perkins
"Well, well, a troubadour," Gram says, opening the door. She has obviously noticed the mesmery that is Joe's face and has already begun flirting. "Here I thought we were in the twenty-first century . . ." She is starting to purr. I have to save him.
-- The Sky is Everywhere by Jandy Nelson
Falling for You:
Often in YA, there's a tricky balance to developing chemistry soon but not too soon. One thing I love about all the novels quoted below is their ability to show the chemistry between characters without feeling like "Insta-Love." Building up the cute moments, romantic tension, and denial to a moment where the MC suddenly realizes s/he is falling for the other person is, in my opinion, one nice way to achieve this.
Mood Music:
Fade Into You - Mazzy Star
Figure Eight - Ellie Goulding
Record Collector - Lissie
Inspiring Authors:
Cynthia Hand, Stephanie Perkins, Natalie Whipple
Favorite "Falling for you" Moments:
This summer hasn't turned out at all like I’d planned. I’m not supposed to be standing in the middle of a barn with a blue-eyed cowboy who’s looking at me like he’s about to kiss me. I shouldn't be wanting him to kiss me.
-- Unearthly by Cynthia Hand
And then there’s the other thing
The thing I’m trying to ignore. The thing I shouldn't want, the thing I can’t have.
And he’s standing in front of me right now.
-- Anna and the French Kiss by Stephanie Perkins
We stay still for what could be hours, eternity, or a breath in time. No machines or alarms. No blinking light to remind us that danger could descend at any moment, and in the void, I find a point of focus where his arm wraps tight around my shoulders like a tether to keep me from spiraling into the abyss.
-- Arclight by Josin McQuien
“I'm not crying over you.” His skin is warm, surprisingly comforting. I'm
tempted to put my arms around his waist, just to know how it feels to hug
someone besides Miles. Before I can think better of it, my hands are on his
back. He flinches, but then relaxes again.
My whole body tingles and I feel slightly guilty about how much I enjoy the
feel of him against me. I like Brady. Seth's brother. At least I think I
do. But I can't seem to stop myself. I need comfort and he's here for me. I put
my head on his shoulder, confused as hell. “I'm such an idiot.”
-- Transparent by Natalie Whipple
The Kiss!
For some people kissing scenes always come easy. I definitely have to be in the right mood. Maybe it's partially feeling frozen by the fact that, like first glances, it can be so easy to write kissing scenes full of cliches. It can be challenging to write them without sounding like a billion other YA kisses that have happened before. In my opinion, there's a tricky balance here too: detail enough to tantalize, but not so much that it gets 'gross', familiarity enough that readers 'feel' the scene, but also with descriptions/reactions that fit the unique personality of the MC.
Mood Music:
Sweater Weather - The Neighbourhood
Desert - Emilie Simon
Collide - Howie Day
Kiss Me - Ed Sheeran
Favorite Authors:
Cynthia Hand, Jandy Nelson
Favorite "The Kiss" Moments:
“Come here.” His voice is so warm and rough-edged
that it sends a shiver down my spine.
“No.”
“I don’t think you really want to be with Christian
Prescott,” he says.
I stare hopelessly down at my hands, afraid to look
at him. “Oh and I suppose you’re my type, right?”
“I suppose I am,” he says, and he’s crossing the
distance between us and taking my face in his hands before I can even think to
stop him.
“Tuck, please,” I manage in a quivery voice.
“You like me Clara,” he says. “I know you do …. Try
to tell me you don’t,” he murmurs so his breath is on my face. I look up into
his eyes and see the beckoning heat in them. I can’t think. His lips are close
to mine and his hands are drawing me closer.
“Tuck,” I breathe, and then he kisses me.
-- Unearthly by Cynthia Hand
He stops again. I think he's going to go
on about Paris some more - but he doesn't. I look up at him. His face is
serious like it was last night in the woods.
"Lennie," he whispers.
I look into his sorrowless eyes and a door
in my heart blows open.
And when we kiss, I see that on the other
side of the door is sky.
-- The Sky is Everywhere by Jandy Nelson
What about you?
Do you have favorite books or songs that inspire great romance scenes?
Tricks to keep things cliche-free, while connecting with readers on an emotional level?
Pivot Point -- by Kasie West
Transparent -- by Natalie Whipple
Arclight -- Josin McQuein
